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Published: Jan 2, 2010

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Random idea I had just so I could animate. Unfortunately, it didn't come out like expected but it could have been worse.

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lightpurge

Jan 2, 2010

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_{This made me laugh. First Off I'd like to say the animation flows smoothly which is a big plus when looking at emoticons.

The green package looks a bit odd. I think the shape is pointy. If you were going with a rounded package try curving it around, or you could just muck around with the package until you find a shape that looks good.

Improvements you could make are:
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Red" /> Showing The Yellow Emote's Squished Body that would be coming out from the bottom.
<img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="10" height="10" alt="" title="Bullet; Blue" /> and of course what I said about the package

Overall, its a very good emoticon, and I enjoyed critiquing it.}